Thursday 13 July 2017

'Ye Letter to the Editor' Feedback: Jasmine Dolisen

          The creative font Jasmine chose was very effective and I like how she included a picture of the title page for A Midsummer Night's Dream at the beginning of her letter. The Shakespearean insults she came up with were brilliant and the purpose she chose for a play within a play was very convincing. The only thing I would suggest is to cut out some information as she was at 491 words when the assignment was instructed to have 200-300. Nevertheless, Jasmine did a great job!

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